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Break-up Sonnet

I took a stab at writing a sonnet. I followed the rhyme scheme ABAB / CDCD / EFEF / GH, in keeping with the structure of Shakespeare’s sonnets. There are one or two lines that don’t have five feet per line, but I generally tried to keep to that. Most of Shakespeare’s sonnets deal with some sort of love, so I made this sonnet about a break-up. The speaker basically just wants to feel nothing anymore, until new love can be felt and old love’s sadness can be buried.

Break-up Sonnet:

Thy whispered words of bitter final song

Bring me to Death by hidden lovers known;

Love’s beauty sang on, but not for too long:

It thumps within now graceless, hardened stone.

Must I endure this? Must I carry on?

Must I constantly crave thy callous touch?

Bury my heart in rotten dirt, so gone

Where I may not absorb this pain as such.

If live I must as now I am, consume

All pulse, longing, beneath the seven seas,

Cast the ashes of wretched love, entomb

All recollection, memory, and glees

For only from ashes do new buds bloom,

So Death brings new life, and silence to gloom.

Sonnet 30

I recorded Sonnet 30 on SoundCloud for the Sonnet Project. This sonnet really captures the sadness of losing someone as a friend and partner, but that remembered friendship and love can also restore you. “The Complete Sonnets and Poems” notes that this sonnet is the first sonnet of Shakespeare’s in which the addressee is called “friend” (440). The speaker seems to consider “friend” as both a friend of the more usual modern definition and potentially as someone the speaker is in love with.

I used Voyant to analyze the poem and the common use of words like  “dear,” “woe” and “moan” speaks to the pain felt by the speaker due to missing his love and friend. There is hope too, though! The sonnet ends on a high note: if the speaker thinks about the friend in times of sorrow, the happy and special aspects about their experiences compensates for the terrible sadness. “New” in Voyant could symbolize feeling these sorrows anew each time, but “new” is also a word used to express moving on and beginning anew. Perhaps the speaker of this poem tries to discretely poke at this hopeful nuance.

Voyant - Sonnet 30



-Emily George

The Stratford Festival – King Lear

King Lear stands as one of Shakespeare’s most captivatingly tragic plays and watching the Stratford Festival’s performance of it last Saturday, March 7 was a real treat. I definitely enjoyed it, much more than I thought I would. Although the 2008 TV film was also well done, I found myself much more enthusiastic and staying with the storyline when I had audience queues to work off of and when the actors were more interactive with the audience. The atmosphere also played a major role in holding my attention – the dim lights, quiet, lack of distractions (like my phone!) and reactions of the audience to jokes and action made the experience more fulfilling and authentic than staring at my computer screen at home.

Prior to the film starting, a nice introduction played, showing the backstage area, actors, and other plays and behind-the-scenes glances into how the Stratford Festival put on their Shakespearean and other plays. Especially intriguing was the amount and quality of the costumes. Even the Queen was impressed with their rendition of her crown. The authenticity of their costumes and props is very impressive. What also probed my interest was the little questionnaire that was displayed. Did you know that King Lear introduced many new words to the English language? Dislocate, half-blooded and unaccommodated were all used first by Shakespeare in this play.

The play itself began cinematically. A feisty storm with flashy bolts of lightning started the introductory credits. I was worried it would not be true to the style of Shakespeare where props and effects were limited, but the actual play began with a dark stage and only some sound-effects. Once the actors began speaking their lines, I was assured that it would be a well-rounded performance.

I particularly appreciated the interpretation of characters. They differed significantly from the way some actors interpreted their characters in the 2008 TV film (although both interpretations could be deemed accurate portrayals and were well acted). In the 2008 film, I found Regan’s character to be quite discrete and timid, especially during the first scene; in Stratford’s version, her character spoke loudly and confidently. I also found Gonneril’s characterization to be more snooty and stuck-up, which complimented Regan’s character really well, and provided a great contrast near the end when they fight over Edmund. As well, Cordelia’s character was more sassy and rebellious in the 2008 version (at least at first), deliberately going against him to prove her true character and be legitimate. She was more emotional and trying to induce rationality into her father, though clearly outraged at her sisters’ false gushing over their father. Stratford’s Cordelia dealt with a more painful separation from her father than the 2008 character. Kent was also more involved – he speaks and plays a greater role. Edmund’s characterization was, if possible, even more slimy – I found I disliked him even more in this version due to the ability of the actor to portray that sickly suck-up attitude. I wasn’t disappointed with the acting of King Lear – Ian McKellan’s performance had a lot to live up to in my mind. Nevertheless, the actor was dramatic, humorous and had good timing. I was especially impressed during the scene with “Poor Tom” and Gloucester where he has his flower crown on and is sinking into madness – it brought out a mixture of sympathy and hilarity. Overall, all the actors spoke their lines as though they understood exactly what they were saying and were having actual conversations, with either other characters or were announcing to the audience themselves.

I would definitely recommend seeing King Lear (or any Shakespeare play) performed on a stage, either live or filmed from the audience as in the Stratford Festival’s performance. It is a great addition to the required watching of it as a movie done cinematically. I personally will plan on seeing the King Lear showing on April 7th!

-Emily George